prompt response: side a, track 20
"this is
the day" by the the
this
song inspired the prompt: the morning after a
night when you didn't sleep: which
inspired 2
responses
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The world always seemed a little
more quiet in the mornings when I would drive home from the car factory in
Kettering after working 3rd shift. And then there was my last morning drive. I
remember feeling all right that morning, not as tired as usual, and maybe that's
why I let my guard down.
I can still
picture what it must've looked like. A driver held up by his seat belt, slumped
forward, running through the STOP sign without the slightest bit of slowing
down, moving closer and closer to the curb to line up perfect bumper to bumper
with a big old pick up truck, metal crumpling on the front hood my little '86
Plymouth Horizon, a small dent in the bumper of the parked truck. And that's
where I came back to consciousness.
I
wasn't panicked, but I heard fluids dripping; I felt sore. I unbuckled my seat
belt, opened the door, and just kind of rolled out of the car and onto the
middle of the street. It didn't take long for a woman from across the street to
come and check on me. Of course, she was an off duty cop. She would actually
help cut me slack on my ticket. A few minutes later, a red minivan came rolling
down the street on its way to work: my mom. I'm just sitting in the street with
my arms hung over my legs talking to this off-duty cop with ambulance and patrol
car on the way--about 10 houses down the
street.
Mom, of course, stops and calls
off work to make sure I'm all right. Around the same time the owner of the
vehicle and his family come out of their house to see what's going on. And now,
after years of wondering aloud at the sign, I finally found out who the deaf kid
on the block was that produced the DEAF CHILDREN AT PLAY sign. Yeah, it was, of
course, the owner of the truck. He was grown now, but still deaf. I hit the
deaf-child-at-play's freaking truck. Damn.
And anyway, everything after that was a blur, and I was all right, the deaf kid
was all right, everyone in the whole damn world was all right. But that was when
I knew I could no longer pull 3rd shifts at
Delphi.
- by Robert Lee Brewer
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- by Jason O'Mara
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